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Hello [이름]!!!
I comment you for answering our homework. You really did a great job!!!
It is important to make an effort to step forward in learning new things so that we can apply it our daily life.
Our children are the greatest gift that we will ever receive in life....so we need to treasure them.
T. Jeny
I remember my first birthday celebration after giving a baby.
>>I can still remember my first birthday celebration after giving birth.
I have a new family member.
>>correct
And I feel to plus happy prior to before.
>>And I had a proir reason to be happy.
Although I couldn\'t get the great gift, I might seem to have big present from everyone that I have known.
>>Though I couldn\'t get a great gift, it seems like I\'ve already received the greatest present.
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