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Thank you very much for these tips, Sun Young! ;)

I changed some of the structure because some clauses are too short to be in a separate sentence.

For example:

Nowadays, people are too busy to eat and make some good food.

And It\'s easy to eat junk food.

We can just say:

Nowadays, people are too busy to eat and make some good food, and it\'s easy to eat junk food.

Happy Friday to us!

ESSAY: There are so many kinds of junk food nowadays. Furthermore, our lifestyle is not as healthy as in the past. How can we be healthy in this generation?
Nowadays, people are too busy to eat and make some good food.

>>CORRECT!

 And It\'s easy to eat junk food.

>>Nowadays, people are too busy to eat and make some good food, and it\'s easy to eat junk food.
So people need to try to reduce the junk food.

>>So people need to try to reduce consuming this.

Also, they need to find some substitute food like soda-tea or juice.

>>Also, they need to find some substitute food like soda tea or juice.

But I think exercise makes people to be healthy the most, even if it\'s one of the hardest one in the world that I think.

>>But I think exercise makes people healthy the most, even if it\'s one of the hardest one in the world that I think of.
Then, exercise with good food is the best way for healthy lifestyle.

>>Then, exercise with good food is the best way for a healthy lifestyle.