Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good morning [이름]! Great Monday morning to you!
Well, I hope you have made a food plan to day for you to have a perfect day too.
I\'ll talk to you then later. Enjoy your day!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
How would you describe a perfect day for you?
Everyday think about my daily schedule before go to bed.
>> I am thinking about my daily schedule before I go to bed.
if I did all things, I would feel satisfaction.
>> If I did all those things, I would feel satisfied/ the satisfaction.
So every morning I make a plan.
>> So I am making a pan every morning.
I think the perfect day that I can sleep deeply.
>> I think the perfect day is that I can have a deep sleep.
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