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2015-12-21 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. I was late for doing my homework. Last weekend, I was very busy to give a farewell party for my husband. My mother-in-law, my sister-in-law's family, and my family gathered together in my mother-in-law's house. My mother-in-law might feel sad, but she didn't show her emotion. She's a great mother.^^ Answer the following hypothetical question in not less than 5 sentences. If you had to teach something, what would you teach? Why? I am very interested in teaching something. The reason why I study politics in graduate school is that I want to teach politics in university. To be more concrete, I would like to teach Korean political history including the pre-modern period. I think we have much to learn from Korean political history. Nonetheless, young people aren't interested in our own history. If I become a professor in university, I would teach the real worth of our history to many young people.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! Thanks for still doing your homework even though it\'s a bit late. ^^ The subject that you want to teach is too difficult. I hope you could make it less boring. If I were to teach something, I would like to teach people how to dance. I can\'t dance to save my life, though. Haha! So IF I could, then I would help others like me who have two left feet. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! I was late for doing my homework. >> I was late in doing my homework.Last weekend, I was very busy to give a farewell party for my husband.>> Last weekend, I was very busy because of my husband\'s farewell party. My mother-in-law, my sister-in-law\'s family, and my family gathered together in my mother-in-law\'s house. >> CORRECT! My mother-in-law might feel sad, but she didn\'t show her emotion. >> My mother-in-law must have felt sad, but she didn\'t let it show.She\'s a great mother.^^ >> CORRECT! I am very interested in teaching something. >> CORRECT!The reason why I study politics in graduate school is that I want to teach politics in university. >> CORRECT!To be more concrete, I would like to teach Korean political history including the pre-modern period. >> To be more specific, I would like to teach Korean Political History, including the pre-modern period.I think we have much to learn from Korean political history. >> CORRECT!Nonetheless, young people aren\'t interested in our own history. >> CORRECT!If I become a professor in university, I would teach the real worth of our history to many young people. >> CORRECT!  

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