Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
I was late for doing my homework.
Last weekend, I was very busy to give a farewell party for my husband.
My mother-in-law, my sister-in-law's family, and my family gathered together in my mother-in-law's house.
My mother-in-law might feel sad, but she didn't show her emotion.
She's a great mother.^^
Answer the following hypothetical question in not less than 5 sentences.
If you had to teach something, what would you teach? Why?
I am very interested in teaching something.
The reason why I study politics in graduate school is that I want to teach politics in university.
To be more concrete, I would like to teach Korean political history including the pre-modern period.
I think we have much to learn from Korean political history.
Nonetheless, young people aren't interested in our own history.
If I become a professor in university, I would teach the real worth of our history to many young people.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! Thanks for still doing your homework even though it\'s a bit late. ^^
The subject that you want to teach is too difficult. I hope you could make it less boring.
If I were to teach something, I would like to teach people how to dance. I can\'t dance to save my life, though. Haha! So IF I could, then I would help others like me who have two left feet.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT! I was late for doing my homework.
>> I was late in doing my homework.Last weekend, I was very busy to give a farewell party for my husband.>> Last weekend, I was very busy because of my husband\'s farewell party.
My mother-in-law, my sister-in-law\'s family, and my family gathered together in my mother-in-law\'s house.
>> CORRECT! My mother-in-law might feel sad, but she didn\'t show her emotion.
>> My mother-in-law must have felt sad, but she didn\'t let it show.She\'s a great mother.^^
>> CORRECT! I am very interested in teaching something.
>> CORRECT!The reason why I study politics in graduate school is that I want to teach politics in university.
>> CORRECT!To be more concrete, I would like to teach Korean political history including the pre-modern period.
>> To be more specific, I would like to teach Korean Political History, including the pre-modern period.I think we have much to learn from Korean political history.
>> CORRECT!Nonetheless, young people aren\'t interested in our own history.
>> CORRECT!If I become a professor in university, I would teach the real worth of our history to many young people.
>> CORRECT!
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