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2015-12-22 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. You seem to be in a good mood, today. This is because we have a Christmas this week, right?^^ Have a nice day! Answer the following hypothetical question in not less than 5 sentences. If you are feeling sad, what food or meal would cheer you up? Why? If I am feeling sad, sweet coffee could make me cheer up. I like coffee very much, so I generally drink up to six cups a day. Whenever I can't come up with any creative ideas, I always drink some coffee. But, there's a secret. In fact, I can't drink black coffee such as americano and espresso. I usually enjoy instant coffee. Drinking a cup of instant coffee is my best way to cheer me up.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! I\'m always in a good mood. Haha! Actually, I recently became a fan of a new K-POP idol group. Watching their videos puts me in a good mood. I guess they are my \"stress reliever\" now. Thanks for doing your homework! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! You seem to be in a good mood, today. >> CORRECT! >> You seem to be in a good mood today. (No comma needed.)This is because we have a Christmas this week, right?^^ >> It\'s because it\'s Christmas this week, right?Have a nice day! >> CORRECT! If I am feeling sad, sweet coffee could make me cheer up. >> If I am feeling sad, sweet coffee could cheer me up.I like coffee very much, so I generally drink up to six cups a day. >> CORRECT! >> usuallyWhenever I can\'t come up with any creative ideas, I always drink some coffee. >> CORRECT! But, there\'s a secret. >> CORRECT! In fact, I can\'t drink black coffee such as americano and espresso. >> CORRECT! I usually enjoy instant coffee. >> CORRECT! Drinking a cup of instant coffee is my best way to cheer me up. >> Drinking a cup of instant coffee is the best way to cheer me up.

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