Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
You seem to be in a good mood, today.
This is because we have a Christmas this week, right?^^
Have a nice day!
Answer the following hypothetical question in not less than 5 sentences.
If you are feeling sad, what food or meal would cheer you up? Why?
If I am feeling sad, sweet coffee could make me cheer up.
I like coffee very much, so I generally drink up to six cups a day.
Whenever I can't come up with any creative ideas, I always drink some coffee.
But, there's a secret.
In fact, I can't drink black coffee such as americano and espresso.
I usually enjoy instant coffee.
Drinking a cup of instant coffee is my best way to cheer me up.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! I\'m always in a good mood. Haha! Actually, I recently became a fan of a new K-POP idol group. Watching their videos puts me in a good mood. I guess they are my \"stress reliever\" now.
Thanks for doing your homework!
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT! You seem to be in a good mood, today.
>> CORRECT!
>> You seem to be in a good mood today. (No comma needed.)This is because we have a Christmas this week, right?^^
>> It\'s because it\'s Christmas this week, right?Have a nice day!
>> CORRECT! If I am feeling sad, sweet coffee could make me cheer up.
>> If I am feeling sad, sweet coffee could cheer me up.I like coffee very much, so I generally drink up to six cups a day.
>> CORRECT!
>> usuallyWhenever I can\'t come up with any creative ideas, I always drink some coffee.
>> CORRECT! But, there\'s a secret.
>> CORRECT! In fact, I can\'t drink black coffee such as americano and espresso.
>> CORRECT! I usually enjoy instant coffee.
>> CORRECT! Drinking a cup of instant coffee is my best way to cheer me up.
>> Drinking a cup of instant coffee is the best way to cheer me up.
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