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2015-12-23 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. Today is a hump day, and tomorrow is the last class this week. Is Christmas special for you? I hope you would have a wonderful Christmas holidays. Answer the following hypothetical question in not less than 5 sentences. When you are 80 years old, what will matter to you the most? Why? When I am 80 years old, my husband is 88 years old. If we are alive until then, our health would be the most important matter. Particularly, I'm dreading he'll got lung disease. As I told you before, my husband is a heavy smoker. I never stop smoking although I always tell him to give up smoking. If he leaves for Malaysia, there would be no one who talks to give up smoking. Regardless of now and in the future, health is a important matter.

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Hi Kaylee! Thank you for dropping by and doing your homework. You should really convince your husband to stop smoking. He might not feel it now, but the bad effects would definitely become apparent as he grows older. Christmas is my favorite holiday! It\'s so fun and festive! I also get to see my family and reunite with my old friends. Check my corrections here. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT!Today is a hump day, and tomorrow is the last class this week. >> Today is the hump day and tomorrow is the last class for this week.Is Christmas special for you? >> CORRECT!I hope you would have a wonderful Christmas holidays. >> I hope you\'ll have a wonderful Christmas. When I am 80 years old, my husband is 88 years old. >> When I\'m 80 years old, my husband would be 88 years old.If we are alive until then, our health would be the most important matter. >> CORRECT!Particularly, I\'m dreading he\'ll got lung disease. >> In particular, I\'m dreading that he would get a lung disease.As I told you before, my husband is a heavy smoker. >> CORRECT!I never stop smoking although I always tell him to give up smoking. >> He never stops smoking although I always tell him to give it up.If he leaves for Malaysia, there would be no one who talks to give up smoking.>> When he moves to Malaysia, there would be no one to talk to him about quitting smoking. Regardless of now and in the future, health is a important matter. >> It doesn\'t matter if it\'s now or in the future; our health is always an important matter.

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