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2015-12-23 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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In my case, whenever I really want to have something, I get what I wanted makes me really happy and satisfied. But one time, I noticed that I felt weird, something is empty in my heart. I hate to have this kind of feeling. I thought that I should be thankful what I have. 1. I usually listen to rock music. 2. P1: What is she doing? P2: She is listening to music. 3. My professor always speaks very slowly. 4. P1: What are you doing tonight? P2: We are going to see a movie. 5. He normally drives very fast.

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Hi Miss [이름]! I had that feeling once, too. Funny how we think we could get something that would make us happy and content only to realize it won\'t. Little by little, I try to tell myself how blessed I am to have everything I need. It\'s a hard thing to do, and I still keep trying to be thankful with everything as well. ^^; Thanks for sharing your thoughts. ^^ Have a beautiful day! Teacher Anne   In my case, whenever I really want to have something, >> Correct! I get what I wanted makes me  really happy and satisfied. >> I get what I want and it makes me feel really happy and satisfied.  But one time, I noticed that I felt weird, something is empty in my heart. >> Correct!  I hate to have this kind of feeling. >> Correct! I thought that I should be thankful what I have. >> I thought that I should be thankful with what I have.1. I usually listen to rock music. >> Correct!2. P1: What is she doing?P2: She is listening to music. >> Correct!3. My professor always speaks very slowly. >> Correct!4. P1: What are you doing tonight?P2: We are going to see a movie. >> Correct!5. He normally drives very fast. >> Correct!

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