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In my case, whenever I really want to have something, I get what I wanted makes me
really happy and satisfied. But one time, I noticed that I felt weird, something is empty in my heart. I hate to have this kind of feeling. I thought that I should
be thankful what I have.
1. I usually listen to rock music.
2. P1: What is she doing?
P2: She is listening to music.
3. My professor always speaks very slowly.
4. P1: What are you doing tonight?
P2: We are going to see a movie.
5. He normally drives very fast.
강사 첨삭
Hi Miss [이름]!
I had that feeling once, too.
Funny how we think we could get something that would make us happy and content only to realize it won\'t.
Little by little, I try to tell myself how blessed I am to have everything I need.
It\'s a hard thing to do, and I still keep trying to be thankful with everything as well. ^^;
Thanks for sharing your thoughts. ^^
Have a beautiful day!
Teacher Anne
In my case, whenever I really want to have something,
>> Correct!
I get what I wanted makes me really happy and satisfied.
>> I get what I want and it makes me feel really happy and satisfied.
But one time, I noticed that I felt weird, something is empty in my heart.
>> Correct!
I hate to have this kind of feeling.
>> Correct!
I thought that I should be thankful what I have.
>> I thought that I should be thankful with what I have.1. I usually listen to rock music.
>> Correct!2. P1: What is she doing?P2: She is listening to music.
>> Correct!3. My professor always speaks very slowly.
>> Correct!4. P1: What are you doing tonight?P2: We are going to see a movie.
>> Correct!5. He normally drives very fast.
>> Correct!
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