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Hi Miss [이름]!
I\'m not a fan of Star Wars as well. I was just curious since it has been having so much publicity. ^^
Thanks for your recommendation. It has an interesting title.
I think it\'s amazing how some movies can make us realize something we\'ve never thought before.
Anyway, thanks for a lovely conversation.
Good luck on making a decision.
I am sure you will do well. ^^;
Aja!
Teacher Anne
I haven\'t watched the new Star Wars movie yet..
>> Correct!
Actually this is not my tastes.
>> Actually, it\'s not my taste.
Recently, I don\'t really have time to watch the movies..
>> Recently, I really don\'t have time to watch movies.
I have watched some Korean movies but they arenot so good..
>> Correct! [are not]
It was too violent..This is kinda old movie \"Amsal\"
>> It was to violent. There is an old movie called \'Amsal\'.
the meaning is Assassination. It is about the history of Korea.
>> It means, \'Assassination\'. It is about the history of Korea.
It makes me think and I have to know that many people died for keeping my country
>> It makes me think and I have to keep in mind that many people died for my country
so I have to ne thankful with it.
>> So I have to be thankful about it.
1. She looks pretty sick. I think she should go to a doctor.
>> Correct!
2. You’ve been driving all day. You must be exhausted!
>> Correct!
3. You shouldn’t smoke so much. It’s bad for your health.
>> Correct!
4. Hey I’m lost. Can you help me?
>> Correct!
5. You have such a beautiful voice. You should sing for us!
>> Correct!
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