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2015-12-23 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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I haven't watched the new Star Wars movie yet..Actually this is not my tastes. Recently, I don't really have time to watch the movies..I have watched some Korean movies but they arenot so good..It was too violent..This is kinda old movie "Amsal" the meaning is Assassination. It is about the history of Korea.It makes me think and I have to know that many people died for keeping my country so I have to ne thankful with it. 1. She looks pretty sick. I think she should go to a doctor. 2. You’ve been driving all day. You must be exhausted! 3. You shouldn’t smoke so much. It’s bad for your health. 4. Hey I’m lost. Can you help me? 5. You have such a beautiful voice. You should sing for us!

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]!

I\'m not a fan of Star Wars as well. I was just curious since it has been having so much publicity. ^^

Thanks for your recommendation. It has an interesting title.

I think it\'s amazing how some movies can make us realize something we\'ve never thought before.

Anyway, thanks for a lovely conversation.

Good luck on making a decision.

I am sure you will do well. ^^;

Aja!

Teacher Anne

 

I haven\'t watched the new Star Wars movie yet..

>> Correct!

Actually this is not my tastes.

>> Actually, it\'s not my taste.
Recently, I don\'t really have time to watch the movies..

>> Recently, I really don\'t have time to watch movies.

I have watched some Korean movies but they arenot so good..

>> Correct! [are not]

It was too violent..This is kinda old movie \"Amsal\"

>> It was to violent. There is an old movie called \'Amsal\'.
the meaning is Assassination. It is about the history of Korea.

>> It means, \'Assassination\'. It is about the history of Korea.

It makes me think and I have to know that many people died for keeping my country

>> It makes me think and I have to keep in mind that many people died for my country 

so I have to ne thankful with it.

>> So I have to be thankful about it.
1. She looks pretty sick. I think she should go to a doctor.

>> Correct!
2. You’ve been driving all day. You must be exhausted!

>> Correct!
3. You shouldn’t smoke so much. It’s bad for your health.

>> Correct!
4. Hey I’m lost. Can you help me?

>> Correct!
5. You have such a beautiful voice. You should sing for us!

>> Correct!

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