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2015-12-24 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

학생이 쓴 원문

ESSAY: In not less than 5 sentences, answer the following: How do you relax after a busy week? Give specific details. After a busy week, I usually enjoy my free time. I sleep enough and wake up late. And I enjoy relaxing time at home like watch TV, talk with my family or make some food, etc. I sometimes meet my friends to eat delicious food or hang out with them. Also, I want to see a movie that I can't see. If I have long vacation or holidays, I will go travel anywhere! These are all of what I do or what I want to do for my relaxation^^

강사 첨삭

Reading your homework makes me want to relax as well!

Thanks for this and Merry Christmas!

ESSAY: In not less than 5 sentences, answer the following: How do you relax after a busy week? Give specific details.
After a busy week, I usually enjoy my free time.

>> CORRECT!

 I sleep enough and wake up late.

>> CORRECT!

 And I enjoy relaxing time at home like watch TV, talk with my family or make some food, etc.

>>And I enjoy relaxing time at home like watching TV, talking with my family or making some food, etc.

 I sometimes meet my friends to eat delicious food or hang out with them.

>>CORRECT!

Also, I want to see a movie that I can\'t see.

>>Also, I want to see a movie that I haven\'t seen.

 If I have long vacation or holidays, I will go travel anywhere!

>>CORRECT!
These are all of what I do or what I want to do for my relaxation^^

>>CORRECT!

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