homework
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Reading your homework makes me want to relax as well!
Thanks for this and Merry Christmas!
ESSAY: In not less than 5 sentences, answer the following: How do you relax after a busy week? Give specific details.
After a busy week, I usually enjoy my free time.
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I sleep enough and wake up late.
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And I enjoy relaxing time at home like watch TV, talk with my family or make some food, etc.
>>And I enjoy relaxing time at home like watching TV, talking with my family or making some food, etc.
I sometimes meet my friends to eat delicious food or hang out with them.
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Also, I want to see a movie that I can\'t see.
>>Also, I want to see a movie that I haven\'t seen.
If I have long vacation or holidays, I will go travel anywhere!
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These are all of what I do or what I want to do for my relaxation^^
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