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Wow! In my case, I didn't accept that I was no longer a child.. When I was 20's,
I had relied on my parents and I didn't realized that my parents were getting old even though I was apart from them..But I realized how foolish I am after studying abroad. I could see and realized that I was so un matual. After cominng back to Korea,
I thought that I was old enough, I should grow more and tried to act as an adult.
It was around 27..It is too late...right?
1. Q: Is this his best book?
A: No, it's his worst one.
2. P1: My soup is too cold.
P2: Well, mine is too hot!
3.P1: What an interesting movie!
P2: Hmm, I thought it was awful.
4. Q: Is the store open?
A: No, I think it's close.
5. I thought he lived close, but he lives really far
강사 첨삭
Hi Miss [이름]!
I had the experienced the same thing.
In my mind, I knew that I have become an adult because of my age.
But when I started working away from home, I realized what a terrible cook I was.
It was then that I knew I had to grow up and be more like an adult.
My cooking skills are still terrible, but I am trying to be better. ^^;
Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Miss [이름]!
Enjoy your Christmas!
Teacher Anne
Wow! In my case, I didn\'t accept that I was no longer a child..
>> Correct!
When I was 20\'s,
>> When I was in my 20\'s
I had relied on my parents and I didn\'t realized that my parents were getting old even though I was apart from them..
>> I had relied on my parents and I didn\'t realize that my parents were getting old even though I was apart from them.
But I realized how foolish I am after studying abroad.
>> Correct!
I could see and realized that I was so un matual.
>> I could finally see and I realized that it was unnatural.
After cominng back to Korea,>> Correct! [coming]
I thought that I was old enough, I should grow more and tried to act as an adult.
>> I thought that I was old enough, and that I should grow more and try to act as an adult.It was around 27..It is too late...right?1. Q: Is this his best book? A: No, it\'s his worst one.>> Correct!2. P1: My soup is too cold. P2: Well, mine is too hot!>> Correct!3.P1: What an interesting movie! P2: Hmm, I thought it was awful.>> Correct!4. Q: Is the store open? A: No, I think it\'s close.>> closed5. I thought he lived close, but he lives really far.
>> Correct!
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