homework

2015-12-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

Environment pollution will be a serious problem in 20 years later. Actually, It is a present problem. As a developing culture, we can live more convenience. But Environment pollution also is accelerated. We can't avoid this dilemma

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!
Hello! How are you feeling today? Well, thank you for sending this is.
Here is a thought that you may ponder on:
\"The object of education is to prepare the young to educate themselves throughout their lives.

In our daily activities, we can learn new things.

Preparing yourself with all the challenges in life is just a trial for you to move forward.

In this way, you will find yourself, knowing that you\'ve learn a lot.\"

T. Jeny

Environment pollution will be a serious problem in 20 years later.

>>Environment pollution will be a serious problem 20 years from now.
Actually, It is a present problem.

>>Actually, it is a current problem.
As a developing culture, we can live more convenience.

>>As a developing culture, we can live more conveniently.
But Environment pollution also is accelerated.

>>But environment pollution is also accelerating.
We can\'t avoid this dilemma.

>>correct

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기