Homework

2015-12-28 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. How was your Christmas this year? As you told me, did you stay at home? I think I spent quality time with my family this Christmas. Anyway, below is my homework today. Answer the following hypothetical question in not less than 5 sentences. If you were given $1000 and you had to spend it only today, what would you buy? Why? First of all, I would make reservation at a wonderful restaurant to have dinner with my family and parents. Maybe they will be happy to gather together and have nice dinner. I think it would be better to spend this money for my family and parents rather than to buy something for me. They are important people in my life, so I would feel happy if I could spend quality time with them. However, if there is some money left after having dinner, I'd like to buy a new coat. Of course, it will be OK even though there is no money left.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! I went shopping with my mom on Christmas day. I bought her two pairs of shoes as a present. Thanks for doing your homework. Check my corrections below.Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! How was your Christmas this year? >> CORRECT! As you told me, did you stay at home? >> Did you just stay at home, like what you told me? I think I spent quality time with my family this Christmas. >> CORRECT! Anyway, below is my homework for today. >> CORRECT! First of all, I would make reservation at a wonderful restaurant to have dinner with my family and parents. >> First of all, I would make a reservation at a wonderful restaurant to have dinner with my family and my parents. Maybe they will be happy to gather together and have nice dinner. >> I think they would be happy to get together and have a nice dinner.I think it would be better to spend this money for my family and parents rather than to buy something for me. >> CORRECT! They are the important people in my life, so I would feel happy if I could spend quality time with them. >> CORRECT! However, if there is some money left after having dinner, I\'d like to buy a new coat. >> CORRECT! Of course, it will be OK even though there is no money left. >> Of course, it will be okay if there is no money left.

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