Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
How was your Christmas this year?
As you told me, did you stay at home?
I think I spent quality time with my family this Christmas.
Anyway, below is my homework today.
Answer the following hypothetical question in not less than 5 sentences.
If you were given $1000 and you had to spend it only today, what would you buy? Why?
First of all, I would make reservation at a wonderful restaurant to have dinner with my family and parents.
Maybe they will be happy to gather together and have nice dinner.
I think it would be better to spend this money for my family and parents rather than to buy something for me.
They are important people in my life, so I would feel happy if I could spend quality time with them.
However, if there is some money left after having dinner, I'd like to buy a new coat.
Of course, it will be OK even though there is no money left.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! I went shopping with my mom on Christmas day. I bought her two pairs of shoes as a present.
Thanks for doing your homework.
Check my corrections below.Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT! How was your Christmas this year?
>> CORRECT! As you told me, did you stay at home?
>> Did you just stay at home, like what you told me?
I think I spent quality time with my family this Christmas.
>> CORRECT! Anyway, below is my homework for today.
>> CORRECT! First of all, I would make reservation at a wonderful restaurant to have dinner with my family and parents.
>> First of all, I would make a reservation at a wonderful restaurant to have dinner with my family and my parents.
Maybe they will be happy to gather together and have nice dinner.
>> I think they would be happy to get together and have a nice dinner.I think it would be better to spend this money for my family and parents rather than to buy something for me.
>> CORRECT! They are the important people in my life, so I would feel happy if I could spend quality time with them.
>> CORRECT! However, if there is some money left after having dinner, I\'d like to buy a new coat.
>> CORRECT! Of course, it will be OK even though there is no money left.
>> Of course, it will be okay if there is no money left.
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