Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
I feel sorry that this Christmas holidays were over.
See you tomorrow.^^
Answer the following hypothetical question in not less than 5 sentences.
If you could spend one good day with just your mother what would you like to do? Why?
If I could spend one good day with my mother, I would like to go to Lim Tae-gyeong's concert with her.
Lim Tae-gyeong is a famous Korean popera singer, and he is my mother's favorite singer.
She has often said that she wants to go to his concert.
If I could go to the concert with her, it would be a good opportunity to be a good daughter.
The problem is that I don't like Lim Tae-gyeong, but I might stand him for my mother.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kaylee! I know how you feel. I feel the same way. Anyway, we have another holiday coming, so cheer up!
Thanks for doing your homework.
Please review my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT! I feel sorry that this Christmas holidays were over.
>> I feel sorry that the Christmas holidays are over.See you tomorrow.^^
>> CORRECT! If I could spend one good day with my mother, I would like to go to Lim Tae-gyeong\'s concert with her.
>> CORRECT! Lim Tae-gyeong is a famous Korean popera singer, and he is my mother\'s favorite singer.
>> CORRECT!
>> operaShe has often said that she wants to go to his concert.
>> CORRECT! If I could go to the concert with her, it would be a good opportunity to be a good daughter.
>> CORRECT!
The problem is that I don\'t like Lim Tae-gyeong, but I might stand him for my mother.
>> The problem is that I don\'t like Lim Tae-gyeong, but I might try to stand him for my mother.
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