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2015-12-28 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, teacher. I feel sorry that this Christmas holidays were over. See you tomorrow.^^ Answer the following hypothetical question in not less than 5 sentences. If you could spend one good day with just your mother what would you like to do? Why? If I could spend one good day with my mother, I would like to go to Lim Tae-gyeong's concert with her. Lim Tae-gyeong is a famous Korean popera singer, and he is my mother's favorite singer. She has often said that she wants to go to his concert. If I could go to the concert with her, it would be a good opportunity to be a good daughter. The problem is that I don't like Lim Tae-gyeong, but I might stand him for my mother.

강사 첨삭

Hello Kaylee! I know how you feel. I feel the same way. Anyway, we have another holiday coming, so cheer up! Thanks for doing your homework. Please review my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~  Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! I feel sorry that this Christmas holidays were over. >> I feel sorry that the Christmas holidays are over.See you tomorrow.^^ >> CORRECT! If I could spend one good day with my mother, I would like to go to Lim Tae-gyeong\'s concert with her. >> CORRECT! Lim Tae-gyeong is a famous Korean popera singer, and he is my mother\'s favorite singer. >> CORRECT!  >> operaShe has often said that she wants to go to his concert. >> CORRECT! If I could go to the concert with her, it would be a good opportunity to be a good daughter. >> CORRECT!  The problem is that I don\'t like Lim Tae-gyeong, but I might stand him for my mother. >> The problem is that I don\'t like Lim Tae-gyeong, but I might try to stand him for my mother.

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