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2015-12-28 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Hmmmm..It is a hard question..I want to never happen to be failed with anything.. I know that I should be failed so that I could learn and be stronger but I am still afraid of being failed..like entering university, having a new job, doing the new project and so on...I wish that it never happends to me but it is impossible..right? 1. I don't remember names well = I'm not good with names. 2. He's really tired of being told what to do. 3. I'm sorry. It was stupid on me to have said that. 4. The students are bored with his exercises. 5. Are you excited with your trip?

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]!

Oh, I definitely understand. Just imagine the feeling you had when you failed at something you really wanted to do.

The feeling of frustration and stress over a failure is definitely hard to overcome.

Plus, it is also hard to encourage yourself in a situation like that.

But you are right, we need failures to grow and be better. ^^

It is definitely a painful process, but it is all worth the pain.

As they say, \"No pain, no gain. \"

Keep on doing your best in everything! Aja! ^^;

See you!

Teacher Anne

 

Hmmmm..It is a hard question..

>> Correct!

I want to never happen to be failed with anything..

>> I wish that I had never failed at anything.
I know that I should be failed so that I could learn and be stronger

>> I know that I need to fail so that I could learn and be stronger 

but I am still afraid of being failed..like entering university, having a new job, doing the new project and so on...

>> But I am still afraid of failing, like entering a university, having a new job, doing a new project, and so on.

I wish that it never happends to me but it is impossible..right?
>> I wish that it would never happen to me but it is impossible, right?
1. I don\'t remember names well = I\'m not good with names.
>> Correct!
2. He\'s really tired of being told what to do.
>> Correct!
3. I\'m sorry. It was stupid on me to have said that.
>> of
4. The students are bored with his exercises.
>> Correct!
5. Are you excited with your trip?

>> about 

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