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Hi Teacher Rose. It's really close to end of year. Happy New Year! I was happy to study with you this year. Our class is finished this Wednesday. I'm going to start our class next Monday.
I'm already close to my middle thirties. If I have a busy week, my body and mine get tired easily. After a busy week, I try to various thing energy up for my body and mind. First of all, I try to sleep for 10 hours. When I'm busy week and I have a stress, I prefer sleep. After sleep for a long time When I wake up, my body and mind getting fresh. Second after a busy week, my thought is complicated. I need to clear my head. Then I concertrate another thing. For example, I do nano block and I paint coloring book. I think we need to hobby for us. It make me concertrate only that when I'm confused. Lastly I sometimes go to amazing spot. Because When I go there, I can think a lot of thing. Then I can image new idea and refresh my mine.
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Hi there Miss [이름]!
Yes! Time is really fast!
I never get tired of hearing your voice every morning ;)
I am so happy to hear your wonderful voice^^
Hi Teacher Rose.
>>CORRECT!
It\'s really close to end of year.
>>It\'s really close to the end of the year.
Happy New Year!
>>CORRECT!
I was happy to study with you this year.
>>CORRECT!
Our class is finished this Wednesday.
>>Our class will finish this Wednesday.
I\'m going to start our class next Monday. >>CORRECT!I\'m already close to my middle thirties.
>>CORRECT!
If I have a busy week, my body and mine get tired easily.
>> If I have a busy week, my body and mind get tired easily.
After a busy week, I try to various thing energy up for my body and mind.
>>After a busy week, I try to various things to increase energy for my body and mind.
First of all, I try to sleep for 10 hours.
>>CORRECT! When I\'m busy week and I have a stress, I prefer sleep.
>>When it is a busy week and I have stress, I prefer to sleep. After sleep for a long time When I wake up, my body and mind getting fresh.
>>After sleeping for a long time and I wake up, my body and mind get refreshed.
Second after a busy week, my thought is complicated.
>>Second, after a busy week, my thought is complicated.
I need to clear my head.
>>CORRECT!
Then I concertrate another thing.
>>Then I concentrate on another thing.
For example, I do nano block and I paint coloring book.
>>For example, I make nanoblocks and I paint coloring book.
I think we need to hobby for us.
>>I think we need a hobby.
It make me concertrate only that when I\'m confused.
>>It makes me concentrate only that when I\'m confused. Lastly I sometimes go to amazing spot.
>>Lastly, I sometimes go to an amazing spot.
Because When I go there, I can think a lot of thing.
>>Because when I go there, I can think of a lot of things. Then I can image new idea and refresh my mine.
>>Then I can imagine new idea and refresh my mind.
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