Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
Like what you corrected today, I said, "He cannot say boo to a goose."
I am confused with 'bo' and 'boo'.
Thank you for correcting it.
Answer the following hypothetical question in not less than 5 sentences.
If you could trade bodies with one of your friends who would it be? What is their best physical feature?
I am satisfied with my body, and I like mine.
But, if I have to choose one of my friends to trade body with me, I would choose Jo Euji.
She is one of my university friends, and has a slim figure.
I have envied her because she has a body that doesn't gain weight even if she eats like a horse.
I always tell her that she is blessed with a slim body.
It would be really good if I could eat much without worrying to gain weight.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kaylee! I have a few friends like that too! They would usually stuff their faces, whereas I would eat like a bird. But it would still be me who would gain the extra pounds. I guess it has something to do with metabolism and good genes.
Thanks for doing your homework.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT! Like what you corrected today, I said, \"He cannot say boo to a goose.\"
>> CORRECT! I am confused with \'bo\' and \'boo\'.
>> CORRECT! Thank you for correcting it.
>> CORRECT! I am satisfied with my body, and I like mine.
>> CORRECT! But, if I have to choose one of my friends to trade body with me, I would choose Jo Euji.
>> CORRECT!
>> bodies She is one of my university friends, and has a slim figure.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> She is one of my university friends who has a slim figure.I have envied her because she has a body that doesn\'t gain weight even if she eats like a horse.
>> CORRECT! I always tell her that she is blessed with a slim body.
>> CORRECT! It would be really good if I could eat much without worrying to gain weight.
>> It would be really good if I could eat a lot without worrying about gaining weight.
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