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2015-12-29 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. Like what you corrected today, I said, "He cannot say boo to a goose." I am confused with 'bo' and 'boo'. Thank you for correcting it. Answer the following hypothetical question in not less than 5 sentences. If you could trade bodies with one of your friends who would it be? What is their best physical feature? I am satisfied with my body, and I like mine. But, if I have to choose one of my friends to trade body with me, I would choose Jo Euji. She is one of my university friends, and has a slim figure. I have envied her because she has a body that doesn't gain weight even if she eats like a horse. I always tell her that she is blessed with a slim body. It would be really good if I could eat much without worrying to gain weight.

강사 첨삭

Hello Kaylee! I have a few friends like that too! They would usually stuff their faces, whereas I would eat like a bird. But it would still be me who would gain the extra pounds. I guess it has something to do with metabolism and good genes. Thanks for doing your homework. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! Like what you corrected today, I said, \"He cannot say boo to a goose.\" >> CORRECT! I am confused with \'bo\' and \'boo\'. >> CORRECT! Thank you for correcting it. >> CORRECT! I am satisfied with my body, and I like mine. >> CORRECT! But, if I have to choose one of my friends to trade body with me, I would choose Jo Euji. >> CORRECT! >> bodies She is one of my university friends, and has a slim figure. >> CORRECT! OR >> She is one of my university friends who has a slim figure.I have envied her because she has a body that doesn\'t gain weight even if she eats like a horse. >> CORRECT! I always tell her that she is blessed with a slim body. >> CORRECT! It would be really good if I could eat much without worrying to gain weight. >> It would be really good if I could eat a lot without worrying about gaining weight.

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