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Hello, teacher.
Thank you for everything this year, teacher Marie.
I thiink my English has been improved much thkank to you.
I hope I would come back with great improvements.
Again, happy new year!!^^ See you Feburary.
Below is the rest of the abstract.
A total of three conditions were required in order to justify the 1623 Coup in terms of Neo-Confucianism.
Firstly, the former king must have great faults, and the second is that the servant who tries to dethrone the king must be a sage, regardless of whether he is a member of the royal family.
The last is that the throne must be taken over by a sage among members of the royal family.
However, king Injo did not meet the qualification for two kinds of role, namely the servant who can dethrone a king and also a new king after dethroning the king, which were required by Zhu Xi's dethrone theory.
This shows that the 1623 Coup's Neo-Confucian legitimacy can never be justified.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! I know that it\'s only a month, but I\'m already missing you. Study hard and do your best there! Make me proud!
Please check my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT! Thank you for everything this year, teacher Marie.
>> CORRECT! I thiink my English has been improved much thkank to you.
>> I think my English has improved a lot, thanks to you.
I hope I would come back with great improvements.
>> I hope I would have more improvements when I come back.Again, happy new year!!^^
>> CORRECT!
See you Feburary.
>> See you in February.A total of three conditions were required in order to justify the 1623 Coup in terms of Neo-Confucianism.
>> CORRECT! Firstly, the former king must have great faults, and the second is that the servant who tries to dethrone the king must be a sage, regardless of whether he is a member of the royal family.
>> Firstly, the former king must have great faults, and the second is that the servant who tries to dethrone the king must be a sage, regardless of whether or not he is a member of the royal family.
The last is that the throne must be taken over by a sage among members of the royal family.
>> The last is that the throne must be taken over by a sage who is a member of the royal family.
However, king Injo did not meet the qualification for two kinds of role, namely the servant who can dethrone a king and also a new king after dethroning the king, which were required by Zhu Xi\'s dethrone theory.
>> However, King Injo did not meet the qualifications for the two kinds of role, namely the servant who can dethrone a king and also a new king after dethroning the king, which were required by Zhu Xi\'s dethrone theory.
This shows that the 1623 Coup\'s Neo-Confucian legitimacy can never be justified.
>> CORRECT!
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