homework
학생이 쓴 원문
There are many importanct thing in my life. They are just changing by the situations.
As you told me, I also sometimes forget what or who is imprtant to me..
Because I focus on whatI am doing now..
Family..friends..my job and so on..however I think that PRESENT is the most important
for me..i want to live well without any regrets..I just realized that this time can be returned...
1. I'll let you drive my car.
2. Hey, do you want me to help you to pack?
3. Why don't you let me go out with my friends?
4. I had my wallet stolen yesterday.
5. I had Juan fixed my door yesterday.
강사 첨삭
Hi Miss [이름]!
You are right. The present is really important.
That\'s why sometimes even though I felt that I failed yesterday, I try to move on and make this day better.
They say there is no use in living in the past.
So I also try to live each day with a purpose. ^^;
Let\'s keep on doing our best and be happy!
Have a lovely day!
Teacher Anne
There are many importanct thing in my life.
>> There are many important things in my life.
They are just changing by the situations.
>> The just change depending on the situation.As you told me, I also sometimes forget what or who is imprtant to me..
>> As you have told me, I also sometimes forget what or who is important to me.Because I focus on whatI am doing now..
>> Because I focus on what I am doing right now.Family..friends..my job and so on..however I think that PRESENT is the most important for me..
>> Family, friends, my job, and so on... However, I think that the present is the most important for me.i want to live well without any regrets..I just realized that this time can be returned...
>> I want to live well without any regrets. I just realized that one cannot turn back time.1. I\'ll let you drive my car.
>> Correct!2. Hey, do you want me to help you to pack?
>> Correct!3. Why don\'t you let me go out with my friends?
>> Correct!4. I had my wallet stolen yesterday.
>> Correct!5. I had Juan fixed my door yesterday.
>> Correct!
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