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2016-01-05 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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I will keep to study English with you. I still can't speak English so I will try again. I will visit foreign country. I want to visit foreign country every year but it is not easy. I will go on a diet. After I lose my weight, I will buy my clothes.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   You outdid yourself today! Some reminders: “I have lost weight.” We don’t use ‘my’ here because we can only lose our own weight ­ we can’t lose someone else’s weight.   Teacher Venus^^   I will keep to study English with you. >>>I will keep on studying English with you.   I still can\'t speak English so I will try again. >>>CORRECT I will visit foreign country. >>>I will visit a foreign country.   I want to visit foreign country every year but it is not easy. >>>I want to visit a foreign country every year but it is not easy. I will go on a diet. >>>CORRECT   After I lose my weight, I will buy my clothes. >>>After I lose weight, I will buy new clothes.

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