Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I will keep to study English with you. I still can't speak English so I will try again.
I will visit foreign country. I want to visit foreign country every year but it is not easy.
I will go on a diet. After I lose my weight, I will buy my clothes.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You outdid yourself today! Some reminders:
“I have lost weight.”
We don’t use ‘my’ here because we can only lose our own weight we can’t lose someone else’s weight.
Teacher Venus^^
I will keep to study English with you.
>>>I will keep on studying English with you.
I still can\'t speak English so I will try again.
>>>CORRECT
I will visit foreign country.
>>>I will visit a foreign country.
I want to visit foreign country every year but it is not easy.
>>>I want to visit a foreign country every year but it is not easy.
I will go on a diet.
>>>CORRECT
After I lose my weight, I will buy my clothes.
>>>After I lose weight, I will buy new clothes.
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