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2016-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Every time, comments you give me make me think and refresh my mood.. Thanks so much!! I can't also imagine living life without the modern toilet or electricity. Nowadays, our life is co convinient and imginary is really happening.. We can turn on the heater, lights and so on with the remotcontrol... Sometimes, I am alittle bit scared that robot will do everything instead of people doing...Sometimes I miss old things... 1. I usually don't work on weekends. 2. I know you're my friend, but in times you behave like you weren't. 3. She has everything under control.= She is on top of things. 4. There was a fire on one of the empty apartments. 5. I have very bad vision, especially at nigh

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Hi Miss [이름]! I am happy that our class puts you in a good mood. ^^; Technology is really changing so fast. Now, the only thing missing is a phone that screams when it is stolen. ^^; I know it sounds ridiculous, but I came up with it after realizing that phones were changing so fast. It\'s funny how cell phones are now called \'smartphones\' right? Anyway, it was such a silly thought. ^^; Thanks for sharing your thoughts in today\'s homework. Have a lovely day! Teacher Anne   Every time, comments you give me make me think and refresh my mood.. >> The comments you give me make me think and refresh my mood every time.Thanks so much!! >> Correct!I can\'t also imagine living life without the modern toilet or electricity. >> Correct!Nowadays, our life is co convinient and imginary is really happening.. >> Nowadays, our life is so convenient and the things we used to imagine are really happening. We can turn on the heater, lights and so on with the remotcontrol... >> Correct! [remote control]Sometimes, I am alittle bit scared that robot will do everything instead of people doing...Sometimes I miss old things...>> Sometimes, I am a little bit scared thinking that a robot, instead of people will do everything. Sometimes, I miss the old things. 1. I usually don\'t work on weekends.>> Correct!2. I know you\'re my friend, but in times you behave like you weren\'t.>> I know you\'re my friend, but at times you behave like you weren\'t.3. She has everything under control.= She is on top of things. >> Correct!4. There was a fire on one of the empty apartments. >> Correct!5. I have very bad vision, especially at nigh >> Correct! [night] 

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