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2016-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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Hello Charlie ^_____^ I think giving recommendation of toursite depends on each preference like traditional culture, shopping, famous attraction and so on. But If someone has only one day to spend in Korea, I would like to recommend Seoul. It may sound like too common because it is already famous city however I think seoul is an aggregation to show Korean culture well because there are a lot of famous places, popular spot and even historical places. And people can get to wherever they want to go by taking subway and bus since there are comfortable traffic system and most places have subway route. So someone even comes to Korea alone they don't need to worry about this. Plus, If they have an app of subway line map it will be truly perfect to move everywhere. If people have enough time to travel more I would like to recommend another cities.

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Hi [이름]! ^^   You did a swell job in writing about which place in Korea would you recommend to someone visiting. ^^ See you on Friday!   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==     I think giving recommendation of toursite depends on each preference like traditional culture, shopping, famous attraction and so on. But If someone has only one day to spend in Korea, I would like to recommend Seoul. >> In my opinion, suggesting tourist sites depends on the interest of the person whether it be culture, shopping, hisorical sites and so on, but if one only had a day to spen in Korea, I would recommend for the person to visit Seoul.   It may sound like too common because it is already famous city however I think seoul is an aggregation to show Korean culture well because there are a lot of famous places, popular spot and even historical places. And people can get to wherever they want to go by taking subway and bus since there are comfortable traffic system and most places have subway route. So someone even comes to Korea alone they don\'t need to worry about this. Plus, If they have an app of subway line map it will be truly perfect to move everywhere. >> It may sound cliched since it\'s a landmark city but I think Seoul represents the totality of Korean culture because of its famous places, historical  landmarks and popular hotspots. In addition, people can go around the city quite easily because of the comfortable public transit with an accompanying phone app of the subway map. That is why if someone decides to tour Korea alone they won\'t have a hard time.   If people have enough time to travel more I would like to recommend another cities. >> I do would like to recommend other cities aside from Seoul if someone has more time to spend touring.

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