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To deal with this subject I searched discovery of Korea on the internet and I found some information. Among them I think MP3 player is the most beneficial discovery in Korea. Because Korea music industry has been developed a lot in past years. Scale of a market has been increased and because of this quality of contents has been improved as well. It might be attributed to Korean’s interest in music however I think MP3 was method of delivery. It has help people to be closer with music in their life. I also spent adolescence with its And as technology develops, people could use MP3 with smart phone at the same. Nowadays, when I change the channel there are so many music programs and I can guess importance of music So I chose it to the most beneficial discovery in Korea.

Hello [이름]! ^^   Thank you for your essay about which discovery do you think made the most impact for the people in your country. ^^ Notice though that I opted not to include the sentence \"Nowadays, when I change the channel there are so many music programs and I can guess importance of music \" because it strayed from the main point of your essay. Other than that, good work overall. ~~~   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==     To deal with this subject I searched discovery of Korea on the internet and I found some information. Among them I think MP3 player is the most beneficial discovery in Korea. >> To answer the topic of which discovery in the last 100 years has been most beneficial for people in my country, I logged onto the internet and found some information and in my opinion, the MP3 player has benefited the Korean people the most. Because Korea music industry has been developed a lot in past years. Scale of a market has been increased and because of this quality of contents has been improved as well. It might be attributed to Korean’s interest in music however I think MP3 was method of delivery. It has help people to be closer with music in their life. I also spent adolescence with its >> Since the Korean music industry has boomed in the last couple of years, this led to the increase of the scale of the market and the improved quality of the music. Now the invention of the MP3 file format, as well as the player, was a means to make music accessible to the Korean people who have great interest in music. I could testify to this because I spent my adoloscence with an MP3 player.   And as technology develops, people could use MP3 with smart phone at the same. Nowadays, when I change the channel there are so many music programs and I can guess importance of music So I chose it to the most beneficial discovery in Korea. >> Furthermore, as technology developed, the MP3 player was added as a function to modern smartphones which it made this even better for music lovers. This is why I chose the MP3 player as the most beneficial discovery in Korea.