Homework!

Actually I thought that first home work is not difficult to me(example: introdue yourself etc.) so, I am confused at firstbecause of its level ... But it was very fun because I have liked to write my story in my diary. I want to understand my writing!! yes. I think so!! people put too much emphasis on learning practical skills. But I don't think that this is bad to our learning and our good life. People learn practical skills with a reason that they wanna success in their area or give their family pride. Although they put many thing it, almost, they want to a smart person or good person. In other words, I'm sure that their wanting mind's the essence is desirable to their life. But I guess that there are people that don't have only their learning's sake: for example, talking about something wit foreigners, trave[이름]g other countries that they dreamed, hoping to speak a different language etc( one's learning's sake). Thus, I think that if people have only their learning's sake, it is ok

Hi, [이름]! (^^,) Thank you very much for writing in our composition board. I\'m glad to know you had fun in answering our homework for the day even if it wasn\'t really what you were expecting. I had fun reading your thoughts and opinions too and I\'m glad that you\'re wil[이름]g to improve not just your speaking skills but also your writing skills. Good job! I\'m looking forward to more compositions from you. ^^ Please allow me to share my opinion regarding this matter as well. I honestly believe that every culture is dictated by its own norm. Majority of us value education very much not only because we would like to achieve a higher form of learning but also because we are after the things that it could possibly bring in the future such as wealth, good position in society and pride. It\'s okay to aspire for those things. There\'s nothing wrong with that. However, learning should be a balanced process. We should not only focus on practical skills but on reasoning as well since both are important in developing good citizens in the society. Learning is a continuous process. We learn until the day we die. There is always a room for improvement and to admit that you don\'t know everything is not a weakness but rather a form of humility.  For as long as you are wil[이름]g to work on what is lacking, there shouldn\'t be  a problem. Thank you so much for doing your assignment [이름]! ^^ I\'ll see you again tomorrow. I hope you have a wonderful day! Take care and God bless! ~Teacher Charry (^_^) Actually I thought that first home work is not difficult to me(example: introdue yourself etc.)>> Actually, I thought the first homework will not be that difficult for me. I thought maybe you would ask me to introduce myself or tell you about my hobbies.   so, I am confused at firstbecause of its level ... >> I was confused at first because of its level. OR >> That\'s why I was confused at first because of its level. But it was very fun because I have liked to write my story in my diary. >> But it was very fun because I have always liked writing down my story in my diary.I want to understand my writing!! >> CORRECT! OR >> [DO YOU MEAN]: I want to improve my writing skills. yes. I think so!! >> Yes, I think so!people put too much emphasis on learning practical skills. But I don\'t think that this is bad to our learning and our good life. >> People put too much emphasis on learning practical skills but I don\'t think it\'s a bad thing. OR >> People put too much emphasis on learning practical skills but I don\'t think it\'s bad for our education or when we\'re trying to pursue a good life. People learn practical skills with a reason that they wanna success in their area or give their family pride. >> People learn practical skills for the reason that they want to succeed in their area or give their family pride. OR >> People learn practical skills because they want to succeed in their chosen career or make their family proud of them. Although they put many thing it, almost, they want to a smart person or good person. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Although people put too much emphasis in it, they do it because they want become smarter or better. In other words, I\'m sure that their wanting mind\'s the essence is desirable to their life. >> In other words, they do it because they want to improve their lives. But I guess that there are people that don\'t have only their learning\'s sake: for example, talking about something wit foreigners, trave[이름]g other countries that they dreamed, hoping to speak a different language etc( one\'s learning\'s sake). >> But I guess there are people who do it not only for learning\'s sake but for other purposes like being able to communicate with foreigners, travel[이름]g to other countries they\'ve always dreamed of  or learning how speak a different language. Thus, I think that if people have only their learning\'s sake, it is ok >> Thus, I think if people would do it for learning\'s sake then it\'s okay.