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Hi Miss [이름]!
There are many people who are making a campaign for the environment.
But, so far, I think it will take us years to recover.
What environmental changes have you noticed in your country lately?
Right now, our country is in a strange dry season.
I hope we can still save the environment.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts. ^^
See you!
Teacher Anne
I think environmental pollution is the most serious problem for now..
>> Correct!
Our life is getting convinient, then that causes lots of pollution..
>> Our life is becoming convenient, but it causes a lot of water pollution.
Many unusual weather phenomena around the world are attributed to global warming.
>> Correct!
If we don’t do something now and let global warming continue,
>> Correct!
we will see even more strange phenomena..
>> we will see a lot of even more strange phenomena.
1. Is that your notebook or mine?
>> Correct!
2. I don\'t like theirs apartment.
>> their
3. That\'s not my problem. It\'s yours.
>> Correct!
4. Your car is green, while mine is black.
>> Correct!
5. Isn\'t their son older than you?
>> Correct!
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