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2016-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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I think environmental pollution is the most serious problem for now.. Our life is getting convinient, then that causes lots of pollution.. Many unusual weather phenomena around the world are attributed to global warming. If we don’t do something now and let global warming continue, we will see even more strange phenomena.. 1. Is that your notebook or mine? 2. I don't like theirs apartment. 3. That's not my problem. It's yours. 4. Your car is green, while mine is black. 5. Isn't their son older than you?

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]!

There are many people who are making a campaign for the environment.

But, so far, I think it will take us years to recover.

What environmental changes have you noticed in your country lately?

Right now, our country is in a strange dry season.

I hope we can still save the environment.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts. ^^

See you!

Teacher Anne

 

I think environmental pollution is the most serious problem for now..

>> Correct!
Our life is getting convinient, then that causes lots of pollution..

>> Our life is becoming convenient, but it causes a lot of water pollution.
Many unusual weather phenomena around the world are attributed to global warming.

>> Correct!
If we don’t do something now and let global warming continue,

>> Correct! 

we will see even more strange phenomena..
>> we will see a lot of even more strange phenomena.
1. Is that your notebook or mine?

>> Correct!
2. I don\'t like theirs apartment.

>> their
3. That\'s not my problem. It\'s yours.

>> Correct!
4. Your car is green, while mine is black.

>> Correct!
5. Isn\'t their son older than you?

>> Correct!

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