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2016-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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There are various ways to escape from the stress.. I liked to go on a trip or drive to go to other places to forget about the stress.. But I need to spend money and also it causes another stress..so nowadays I just stay in the house and take some rest.. S[이름]ping or studying English and Japanese make me feel better.hehe 1. "He will come tomorrow." She told me that he would come tomorrow. 2."I see the clouds." He told me that she saw the clouds. 3. "My mother is taking the bus to work tomorrow." He told me that his mother will take the bus to work tomorrow. 4. "I will call you." I told her that I would call her. 5. "I have been there." She told me that she was there. a) had been b) has been c) was

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]!

After reading your homework, I suddenly want to go somewhere too. ^^

Anyway, you are right, traveling also causes stress, but it is still a great option.

I\'m thinking of the beach as I read your letter.

I am not a good swimmer but maybe watching the sunset on the beach is nice. ^^

Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this. ^^

See you later!

Teacher Anne

 

There are various ways to escape from the stress..

>> Correct!
I liked to go on a trip or drive to go to other places to forget about the stress..

>> Correct!
But I need to spend money and also it causes another stress..

>> But I need to spend money and it also causes stress.

so nowadays I just stay in the house and take some rest..

>> Correct!
S[이름]ping or studying English and Japanese make me feel better.hehe
>> Correct!
1. \"He will come tomorrow.\"
She told me that he would come tomorrow.

>> Correct!
2.\"I see the clouds.\"
He told me that she saw the clouds.

>> Correct!
3. \"My mother is taking the bus to work tomorrow.\"
He told me that his mother will take the bus to work tomorrow.

>> Correct!
4. \"I will call you.\"
I told her that I would call her.

>> Correct!
5. \"I have been there.\"
She told me that she was there.
>> Correct!

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