HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Miss [이름]!
After reading your homework, I suddenly want to go somewhere too. ^^
Anyway, you are right, traveling also causes stress, but it is still a great option.
I\'m thinking of the beach as I read your letter.
I am not a good swimmer but maybe watching the sunset on the beach is nice. ^^
Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this. ^^
See you later!
Teacher Anne
There are various ways to escape from the stress..
>> Correct!
I liked to go on a trip or drive to go to other places to forget about the stress..
>> Correct!
But I need to spend money and also it causes another stress..
>> But I need to spend money and it also causes stress.
so nowadays I just stay in the house and take some rest..
>> Correct!
S[이름]ping or studying English and Japanese make me feel better.hehe
>> Correct!
1. \"He will come tomorrow.\"
She told me that he would come tomorrow.
>> Correct!
2.\"I see the clouds.\"
He told me that she saw the clouds.
>> Correct!
3. \"My mother is taking the bus to work tomorrow.\"
He told me that his mother will take the bus to work tomorrow.
>> Correct!
4. \"I will call you.\"
I told her that I would call her.
>> Correct!
5. \"I have been there.\"
She told me that she was there.
>> Correct!
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