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2016-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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I think so..People are crazy about fastfood and so do I. It makes our lives so convinient.. Nowadays, I can easily see some restaurants with Drive Through.. even Star bucks serve it. We don't need to get off the car. We can get food right away... Especially, in the morning, it is really helpful. 1. She made him promise that he wouldn't tell anyone. 2. Does your tooth still hurt? Yes, I have to get a dentist to get it looked at soon. 3. I had my bike fixed a couple of days ago. 4. I will notlet you get away with this! 5. Don't let him say these things about you!

강사 첨삭

Hello, Miss [이름]!

I have been so used to eating at fast food restaurants that when my food does not come in 10 minutes, I get impatient already. ^^

Fast food restaurants are great since we can eat fast and go somewhere when we are done.

Like you, I also find them incredibly helpful in the morning, when everyone is in a rush. ^^

Is there a food that you like to eat in fast food restaurants?

Sometimes, I miss home cooked meals too.

But as you know, I am not good at cooking, so I settle for bread. ^^;

See you!

Teacher Anne

 

I think so..People are crazy about fastfood and so do I.

>> I think so. People are crazy about fastfood and so am I.
It makes our lives so convinient..

>> Correct! [convenient]
Nowadays, I can easily see some restaurants with Drive Through..

>> Nowadays, I can easily find restaurants with their own \"drive through\" .
even Star bucks serve it. We don\'t need to get off the car.

>> Even Starbucks has it. We don\'t need to get off the car.
We can get food right away... Especially, in the morning, it is really helpful.
>> Correct!

1. She made him promise that he wouldn\'t tell anyone.

>> Correct!
2. Does your tooth still hurt? Yes, I have to get a dentist to get it looked at soon.

>> Correct!
3. I had my bike fixed a couple of days ago.

>> Correct!
4. I will notlet you get away with this!

>> Correct!  [not let]
5. Don\'t let him say these things about you!

>> Correct!

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