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2016-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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In my opinion, the children have to do chores or tasks at home. In my case, my children are responsible for cleaning their room. Also they have to clean the tables and my eldest daughter has to vacuum the floor. Studying is very important for them. Helping is very important, when they grow up. In my case, when they finish their chores, I give the pocket money.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   You wrote correct sentences. I\'m proud of you.  Some reminders: You use a plural count noun with no article if you mean all or any of that thing. examples: I don\'t like dogs. Do they have children? I don\'t need questions. Give me answers!   Teacher Venus^^   In my opinion, the children have to do chores or tasks at home. >>>In my opinion, the children have to do chores or tasks at home.   In my case, my children are responsible for cleaning their room. >>>CORRECT Also they have to clean the tables and my eldest daughter has to vacuum the floor. >>>CORRECT Studying is very important for them. >>>CORRECT Helping is very important, when they grow up. >>>Helping is very important when they grow up. In my case, when they finish their chores, I give the pocket money. >>>In my case, when they finish their chores, I give them pocket money.

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