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Hello [이름]!!!

Wow!!! It was really a horrifying experience for you, but it was a nice thing that you were fine.

I commend you for expressing your opinion about our topic.

Have a great day and enjoy studying English!!!

T. Jeny

ESSAY: Is unemployment a great problem where you live now?
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Unemployment is a great problem in Korea.

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 I think it is not only Korea but also other countries.

>> I think it is not only in Korea but also in other countries.
 Actually, there are many openings in the web-site which is good for job seeker.

>> Actually, there are many job openings on the website which is good for job seeker.

But, unfortunately, there are only few good vacancies which are good salary, benefits, or working place for the people.

>>Unfortunately, there are only a few good job vacancies which offer a good salary, a high benefit, or a nice working place for applicants.
It’s because lots of company owners want to make plenty of profit from the same things.

>>It’s because lots of company owners want to make plenty of profit at the same time. (What do you mean by, the same thing? Sorry!)
 And it is the best way that they already knew to reduce manpower instead of reducing quality of their products.

>>And the best way to earn more is to reduce manpower instead of reducing the quality of their products.

 So, for example, they would like to reduce their 3 employees to 2 and dividing 3 people’s work to 2 persons.

>>For example, they would like to reduce their 3 employees into 2 and divide the work of 3 people to 2 persons only.
This phenomenon is a kind of common and makes people to do overtime work every day.

>>This phenomenon is common and it makes people do overtime work every day.
 Anyways, I wish someday owners realize they should reduce their interests and need to share their benefits with their employees and give them enough work to do on working hours.

>>Anyways, I wish someday owners would realize that they need to reduce their own interest and they need to share their benefits to their employees and give them enough work during their working hours.