homework
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Do memories hinder or help people in their effort learn from the past and succeed in the present?
I am sure that the memories from the past will help that people.
Actually I have soul-mates that have very hard memories. What if they did't have that? I think they would't have a eager hope about happiness and a love about the people that always be with them. Or the memories,even if they are bad things, help people with hope and passion.
The succeed person that have respected i has bad memory that is 'poverty'. It made her bear spite about studying. So she could go to the university Of Seoul which is said best university of the Korea.
I do not wanna say about bad memories and good memories. Just.. even if the memories are bad things. Of course good memories will help people with lesson.
So I think the memories will not hinder that people but help.
Actually I do not understand a other opinion say that memories from the past will hinder people. So I wanna listen their opinion really.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! ^^
How are things with you today?
I hope you\'re enjoying this day.
You were right when you said, our past experiences could help us learn and succeed.
As they say, experience is the best and the most brutal teacher.
You can either learn from it or run away from it.
Good memories make us happy. It could also help build our self-confidence.
Bad memories on the other hand could motivate us and help us work harder to achieve our goals.
However, one should not delve and stay in the past, for the past has been long gone.
The past is nothing but a memory and no matter how much a person tries to relive it, it\'s not the same anymore because it has already passed.
Instead of staying in the past, one should delve on the lessons left by it because they will serve as a guide for a good present and a better future.
Thank you for this composition [이름]. I was able to reflect once again. See you tomorrow. Take care!
~Teacher Charry (^^,)
Do memories hinder or help people in their effort learn from the past and succeed in the present?
>> Do memories hinder or help people in their effort to learn from the past and succeed in the present?
I am sure that the memories from the past will help that people.
>> I am sure that the memories from the past will help people learn and succeed.Actually I have soul-mates that have very hard memories.
>> Actually, I have soul mates who have had very bad memories.
What if they did\'t have that?
>> What if they didn\'t have that?
OR >> What if they didn\'t experience that?
I think they would\'t have a eager hope about happiness and a love about the people that always be with them.
>> I think they wouldn\'t be eager or hopeful in finding happiness and love from the people they are always with.
Or the memories,even if they are bad things, help people with hope and passion.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: Memories, even if they are bad, give people hope and help them become passionate about something.
The succeed person that have respected i has bad memory that is \'poverty\'.
>> A successful and respected person I know also had a bad memory on \'poverty\'.
It made her bear spite about studying. So she could go to the university Of Seoul which is said best university of the Korea.
>> It made her study harder so she could go to the University of Seoul which is said to be the best university in Korea.
So I think the memories will not hinder that people but help.
>> So I think memories will not hinder but help people.Actually I do not understand a other opinion say that memories from the past will hinder people.
>> Actually, I do not understand the opinion that memories will hinder people from learning or succeeding.
So I wanna listen their opinion really.
>> I really want to listen to their opinions.
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