homework.
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In my opinion, elementary students should be allowed to have their cell phones.
These days a lot of bad situation are happending in the world.
So many parents want to know their chirlend 's safety.
In my case, I often call to check my children's situation.
This are reasons why elementary students should be allowed cell phones.
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You did well again. Some reminders:
1. Check your spelling.
2. The verb is plural if the noun it refers to is plural.
examples: These days a lot of bad situations are happening in the world.
These are the reasons why elementary students should be allowed to have cell phones.
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In my opinion, elementary students should be allowed to have their cell phones.
>>>CORRECT
These days a lot of bad situation are happending in the world.
>>>These days a lot of bad situations are happening in the world.
So many parents want to know their chirlend \'s safety.
>>>So many parents want their children to be safe.
In my case, I often call to check my children\'s situation.
>>>CORRECT
This are reasons why elementary students should be allowed cell phones.
>>>These are the reasons why elementary students should be allowed to have cell phones.
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