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2016-01-14 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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In my case, I believe the first impressions about a person. It is not always correct But I can't ged rid of the first impressions after meeting the person. That is why I also try to show the good impressions of me whenever I meet people. 1. My grandmother's ankles were swollen from walking so much. 2. Most of the fans were disappointed with the concert. 3. This is exciting news! 4. His explanation wasn't very convincing. 5. The woman worked for 15 hours straight. She was exhausted.

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]!

Have you heard of the saying, \"First impressions last\"?

I also agree with it. Maybe that is why we dress up when we go on a date or meet people for the first time.

But you are right, first impressions can also be wrong sometimes.

And because I made the same mistakes before, I try not to believe in my first impression.

But it is really hard. ^^;

Anyway, thanks for such a fun conversation.^^;

See you tomorrow!

Teacher Anne

 

In my case, I believe the first impressions about a person.

>> In my case, I believe in my first impressions about a person.

It is not always correct

>> Correct! [.]
But I can\'t ged rid of the first impressions after meeting the person.

>> Correct! [get]
That is why I also try to show the good impressions of me whenever I meet people.

>> That is why I also try to show a good impression whenever I meet people.
1. My grandmother\'s ankles were swollen from walking so much.

>> Correct!
2. Most of the fans were disappointed with the concert.
>> Correct!
3. This is exciting news!
>> Correct!
4. His explanation wasn\'t very convincing.
>> Correct!
5. The woman worked for 15 hours straight. She was exhausted.

>> Correct!

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