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Should people pay more attention to the opinioms of people who are older and more experienced? I think that is not a duty. Ofcourse people often should hear their opinion. There is a reason for that. The reason is that lessons from experience of the life can not be ignored. Whether the experiences failure or success, I am sure that all of the experiences always give lessons to us. We should not depend on that , but we should refer to their opinion. Because although the lessons are important to us, we should decide something about our lives for our selves. If we always depend on that, our confidence of a decision will not improve anymore. So My opinion is that people should refer to that.

Hello there [이름]! (^^,) How\'s your day going so far? I hope you\'re having a good one. Thank you very much for writing in our composition board. I enjoyed reading your thoughts and opinions regarding this matter. I agree with you when you said we should pay more attention to the advice the older generation gives us. They say, \"experience is the best teacher\". The more experiences that you have, the wiser and better person you become. That\'s why in my opinion, we should listen to our elderlies. The accumulated wisdom of older people on living can serve as a helpful guide for younger people. They bring experiential knowledge of just about every problem a human being can go through. People from their teens to middle age will find that the road map for life elders provide can help them take a new look at their own situations and choose new ways of living that will make them happier. However, we should not totally rely on it because some of the pieces of advices given to us could not be applicable anymore in our present situation. They should only serve as a guide. We should still be assertive and critical when it comes to making decisions. This was a very good reflection for me. I hope you learned something too. I\'ll see you again tomorrow. Take care always. ~Teacher Charry (^_^)Should people pay more attention to the opinioms of people who are older and more experienced? >> Should people pay more attention to the opinions of people who are older and more experienced?I think that is not a duty. >> I think it is not our duty to do that.Ofcourse people often should hear their opinion. >> Of course, people should often listen to their opinions. There is a reason for that. >> CORRECT! OR >> There\'s a reason why. The reason is that lessons from experience of the life can not be ignored. >> The reason is that, lessons from experiences in life cannot be ignored.Whether the experiences failure or success, I am sure that all of the experiences always give lessons to us. >> Whether the experiences are about failure or success, I am sure that all of them will always give us lessons. OR >> Whether the experiences are about failure or success, I am sure that we could learn from them. We should not depend on that , but we should refer to their opinion. >> We should not depend on that but rather use their opinions as a reference.Because although the lessons are important to us, we should decide something about our lives for our selves. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Because although the lessons are important to us, we should decide something for ourselves.If we always depend on that, our confidence of a decision will not improve anymore. >> If we always depend on what our elderlies say, our assertiveness and decision-making skills will not improve anymore.So My opinion is that people should refer to that. >> My opinion is that people should only use their elderlies\' opinions as a reference.