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2016-01-22 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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I am sorry for absenting our class I was deep sleeping when you called. I didn't heard any sound at all. After finishing my night duty, I might be very tired. 1. Millions of people in poor countries still do not have access to electricity or safe drinking water. 2. He was the heir to the throne. 3. Her rapid ascend In the world entertainment surprised her critics and delighted her fans. 4. We watched as the plane ascended. 5. The manager convinced that competition had affected profits.

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Hello there, [이름]!!!!Making a big step in achieving your goals in speaking the English language is a big change for you to improve your skills. Start making a big step of doing something extraordinary in studying English.Have smile on your face!!!T, Jeny   I am sorry for absenting our class >>I am sorry for being absent on our class.I was deep sleeping when you called. >>I was in a deep slep when you called.I didn\'t heard any sound at all. >>I didn\'t heardany sound at all.After finishing my night duty, I might be very tired.>>correct1. Millions of people in poor countries still do not have access to electricity or safe drinking water.>>correct2. He was the heir to the throne.>>correct3. Her rapid ascend In the world entertainment surprised her critics and delighted her fans.>>Her rapid ascent in the world of entertainment surprised her critics and delighted her fans.4. We watched as the plane ascended.>>correct5. The manager convinced that competition had affected profits. >>The manager conceded that competition affected profits.

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