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Happy Friday Chalie!
I couldn't clearly understand this question and I'm not sure I got the point of question.
I think teachers shouldn't be paid according to how much their students learn
If teachers belong to some educational institution, they should arrange equal opportunity to teachers beacause there can be any controversy. Role of teacher is teaching something to student and they should make an effort to how to teach student well. But if there exist something bothering them they may lose their role since they concern somthing. Regarding pay, it can be the problem as well because there is no someone who doesn't care about their salary then teaching will be degenerated. I think it can be applied to many conditions. So I don't agree teacher should be paid according to the number of their students
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Hello [이름]! ^^
Thank you for writing an essay even though it wasn\'t so clear. ~~~
Actually, you almost got the point of the question. Let\'s see the question as a situation;
If a student learns a lot from a teacher, the teacher should get paid more.
However, if the student doesn\'t learn anything from a teacher, the teacher should not be paid at all.
Do you agree or disagree?
That is the question. ^^
It\'s alright thought. Still, thank you for the essay. ^^ You did a good job writing about your opinion.
All good things,
==Teacher Charlie==
I think teachers shouldn\'t be paid according to how much their students learn.
>> CORRECT
If teachers belong to some educational institution, they should arrange equal opportunity to teachers beacause there can be any controversy.
>> If teachers belong to an educational institution, they should be presented equal opportunity to avoid any controversy.
Role of teacher is teaching something to student and they should make an effort to how to teach student well. But if there exist something bothering them they may lose their role since they concern somthing.
>> The role of a teacher is to teach their students and they make an effort to teach their students well. However, if something is bothering a teacher, it might affect the quality of their work.
Regarding pay, it can be the problem as well because there is no someone who doesn\'t care about their salary then teaching will be degenerated. I think it can be applied to many conditions. So I don\'t agree teacher should be paid according to the number of their students
>> Regarding pay, it might pose a problemn as well because there isn\'t anyone who isn\'t concerned how much salary they make when the quality of their teaching declines. I think other factors can also be considered. That is why I don\'t agree that teachers should be paid according to the number of students they have.
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