homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Today's fashion trend is personality.
I think fashion is no answer.
I like retro style. And I am not sensitive the newest trend.
But My friends respect my style. And I also admit friend's.
And I think that fashion is a self confidence.
I just say that try it on your own style.
That will be new trend.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
I know that you have the determination to achieve your goals in life.
Just put your best foot forward in order for you to be successful.
Have a great day!!!
T.Jeny
Today\'s fashion trend is personality.
>>Today\'s fashion trend is having good personality.I think fashion is no answer.
>>I think fashion is not the answer.I like retro style.
>>correct
And I am not sensitive the newest trend.
>>And I am not sensitive to the newest trend.But My friends respect my style. And I also admit friend\'s.
>>My friends repect my syle and I aslo do the same.
And I think that fashion is a self confidence.
>>And I think fashion is having self confidence.I just say that try it on your own style.
>>I will just say, try your own style.That will be new trend.
>>That will be a new trend.
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