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2016-01-25 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Today's fashion trend is personality. I think fashion is no answer. I like retro style. And I am not sensitive the newest trend. But My friends respect my style. And I also admit friend's. And I think that fashion is a self confidence. I just say that try it on your own style. That will be new trend.

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Hello [이름], I know that you have the determination to achieve your goals in life. Just put your best foot forward in order for you to be successful. Have a great day!!! T.Jeny   Today\'s fashion trend is personality. >>Today\'s fashion trend is having good personality.I think fashion is no answer. >>I think fashion is not the answer.I like retro style. >>correct And I am not sensitive the newest trend. >>And I am not sensitive to the newest trend.But My friends respect my style. And I also admit friend\'s. >>My friends repect my syle and I aslo do the same. And I think that fashion is a self confidence. >>And I think fashion is having self confidence.I just say that try it on your own style. >>I will just say, try your own style.That will be new trend. >>That will be a new trend.

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