homework

If I had 1,000,000 dollars to give away, how would I do it? First, I would deposit the money in my bank, because I didn't plan to use the money. Second, I would give a part of the money to my parents, because of repay their favor at least. Lastly, I would plan to buy delicious food to freshmen in my school, because I am sophomore in my school since this year.

Hello [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework. You are a such filial son and a very generous senior. I think your juniors in school would love that. Please check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~  If I had 1,000,000 dollars to give away, how would I do it? >> CORRECT! First, I would deposit the money in my bank, because I didn\'t plan to use the money. >> First, I would deposit the money in my bank account because I don\'t have plans of using the money yet. Second, I would give a part of the money to my parents, because of repay their favor at least. >> Second, I would give a part of the money to my parents to at least repay them for everything that they did for me. Lastly, I would plan to buy delicious food to freshmen in my school, because I am sophomore in my school since this year. >> Lastly, I would buy some delicious food for the freshmen in my school because I am now a sophomore.