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Can working to reach an objective be caluable even if the objective is not reached? Of course! I will say It is exactly "yes!" Because working to reach an objective gives us energy of an life. Because of the hope of an objective, We are gonna do something very passionately. And then, people will realize something about a one's life or a hope. Let me say a story that I have experienced today about my life. I have thought untill today that I will be able to bear solitude for my success about my fashion designing . In today, I have read a book , because of improving my imagination. But while reading a book, I realize my dear people are more important than my success and it is worse to lose a my close person not my dream. Moreover I sometimes realize my favorite hobby while doing something passionately for my objective. So My answer is yes!

Hi, [이름]!(^^.) How are you doing so far? I hope you\'re fee[이름]g better. Thank you very much for writing in our composition board again. Our mistakes from our previous experiences are actually lessons that we have to learn the hard way. Character makes a man. To be a man with a good character, he should first be able to learn from his past experiences especially from the mistakes that he\'d once made. It is true that attaining your objective or goal is important but I honestly believe that the process is a lot more important. Undergoing the right process molds us into the person we are meant to become. It\'s good to aim for perfection but in order to attain it, one should be wil[이름]g to undergo a series of failures. Thank you for this beautiful composition [이름]. See you again tomorrow and God bless! ~Teacher Charry (^_^) Can working to reach an objective be caluable even if the objective is not reached? >> Can working to reach an objective be valuable even if the objective is not reached? Of course! >> CORRECT! OR >> Absolutely! I will say It is exactly \"yes!\" >> I will exactly say \"yes!\"Because working to reach an objective gives us energy of an life. >> It\'s because working to reach an objective gives us energy in life.Because of the hope of an objective, We are gonna do something very passionately. >> Because of the hope an objective gives, we are going to do something very passionately.And then, people will realize something about a one\'s life or a hope. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: People will then realize something about life or hope. Let me say a story that I have experienced today about my life. >> CORRECT! OR >> Let me share a story that I have experienced today about my life.I have thought untill today that I will be able to bear solitude for my success about my fashion designing . >> I\'ve never thought about my ability to bear solitude and achieve success in fashion designing until today. In today, I have read a book , because of improving my imagination. >> Today, I read a book because I want to improve my imagination. But while reading a book, I realize my dear people are more important than my success and it is worse to lose a my close person not my dream. >> But while reading a book, I realized that my loved ones are more important than my success and losing them would we worse than losing my dream. Moreover I sometimes realize my favorite hobby while doing something passionately for my objective. >> Moreover, I sometimes realize my favorite hobby while doing something passionately for my objective. So My answer is yes! >> CORRECT! OR >> That\'s why my answer is yes!