Homework

2016-01-27 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: 1.Rain or sleet is predicted for tomorrow. 2.Both of my pencils have an eraser 3.Neither the lion tamer nor the clowns are signing any autographs tonight. 4.Everybody at the fourth of July parade was carrying an American flag. 5.Several of the field hockey players also belong to the track team. -- I'm glad you like my presents! I feel very happy to hear that. Our specail moments will be stayed in my heart too. And I will pay more attention in our class so that we can make specail moments more. I'm really happy! Haha, see you later. XD Ah! The animation movie which I told you yesterday is <The Spiriting Away Of Sen And Chihiro>.

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Hello, [이름]! Thank you for being so diligent! You did a good job. Please study harder next time. I will always guide you every step of the way. Have a great night.   P.S. I really loved everything. I wish that I can just keep them but they are food. So I have to eat them. They are so precious to me. Hehehehe! Thank you so much! My family and I shared it together. I saved some for me so I can eat it at work to give me more energy and inspiration to talk to you. kkk! ^^ Thank you my dear sister! See you!!!   Teacher Carmen ^^   1. Rain or sleet is predicted for tomorrow.>> Correct!2. Both of my pencils have an eraser.>> has 3. Neither the lion tamers nor the clowns are signing the autographs tonight.>> Correct!4. Everyone in the 4th of July parade was carrying an American flag.>> Correct!5. Several of the hockey players also belong to the track team. >> Correct!   I\'m glad you like my presents! >> Correct! I feel very happy to hear that. >> Correct! Our specail moments will be stayed in my heart too. >> Our special moments will also stay in my heart. And I will pay more attention in our class so that we can make specail moments more. >>And I will pay more attention in our class so that we can make more special moments.  I\'m really happy! >> Correct! Haha, see you later. XD>> Haha! See you later. XDAh! The animation movie which I told you yesterday is <The Spiriting Away Of Sen And Chihiro>. >> Ah! The animated movie which I told you about yesterday is \"The Spiriting Away Of Sen and Chihiro\".

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