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2016-01-29 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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In my opinion, a sence of humor is the most important characteristic that a person can have to be successful in life..I thought that intelligence is the important thing before but I realized that some connections with the work..We also need to have other things to be successful however I will have more oppotunities when I have a sense of humor. 1. Q: Why won't your brother talk to me? A: Because you told him he was stupid! That was the very mean thing to say. 2. Q: Do you like cats or dogs? A: I like them both, but I think I like cats more than dogs. 3. Q: Is this the road to San Francisco? A: Yes, it is. 4. Q: Do you know the name of an artist who painted this portrait? A: Yes, it's Henri. 5. Q: We'll never make it on time! A: Sure we will! I know the shortcut

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Hi Miss [이름]! I think having a sense of humor is really helpful to take off the stress from everything. When I spend time with a friend who has a great sense of humor, I start to feel refreshed and happy. I also think that people with a good sense of humor have an interesting outlook in life. Sometimes, they can surprise you. ^^ Thanks for sharing your ideas, Miss [이름]! See you later! Teacher Anne   In my opinion, a sence of humor is the most important characteristic that a person can have to be successful in life.. >> Correct! [sense] I thought that intelligence is the important thing before but I realized that some connections with the work.. >> I thought that intelligence was an important thing, but I realized that we need connections at work. We also need to have other things to be successful >> Correct! however I will have more oppotunities when I have a sense of humor. >> Correct! [opportunities]1. Q: Why won\'t your brother talk to me?A: Because you told him he was stupid! That was the very mean thing to say.>> Correct! 2. Q: Do you like cats or dogs?A: I like them both, but I think I like cats more than dogs.>> Correct! 3. Q: Is this the road to San Francisco?A: Yes, it is.>> Correct! 4. Q: Do you know the name of an artist who painted this portrait?A: Yes, it\'s Henri.>> Correct! 5. Q: We\'ll never make it on time!A: Sure we will! I know the shortcut >> Correct!

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