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2016-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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I think that they are enjoying the extreme feelings while the are doing the dagerous activities and also they feel satisfied what they did...Usually young people like to do these actictities...right? I also tried to the extreme sports and I was so proud of myself after what I have done..but...I don't want to do it anymore... I don't want to feel the extreme exciting feelings...hehe 1. We passed by your house the other day. 2. Hey, would you like to come over next Thursday? 3. I was out very late last night and didn't get in until 4 AM. 4. The police let the thief slip through their fingers at the last moment. 5.Maria has never fit on with the crowd. She has always been a rebel.

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Hi Miss [이름]!

What kind of extreme sports have you tried?

When I watch people jumping from high places, I sometimes envy them. ^^

When I was younger, I wanted to try bungee jumping.

But I think it isn\'t allowed anymore.

Honestly, I think I\'m not as brave as others are.

I\'d probably have a heart attack if I do something extreme. ^^

Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Miss [이름]!

See you!

Teacher Anne

 

I think that they are enjoying the extreme feelings while the are doing the dagerous activities

>> I think they are enjoying the extreme feelings that they get while they are doing dangerous activities

and also they feel satisfied what they did...

>> and they also feel satisfied with what they did.

Usually young people like to do these actictities...right?

>> Usually, young people like to do these activities, right? 

I also tried to the extreme sports and I was so proud of myself after what I have done..but...I don\'t want to do it anymore...
>> I also tried doing some extreme sports and I was so proud of myself after what I did, but I don\'t want to do it anymore.

I don\'t want to feel the extreme exciting feelings...hehe
>> Correct!

1. We passed by your house the other day.

>> Correct!
2. Hey, would you like to come over next Thursday?

>> Correct!
3. I was out very late last night and didn\'t get in until 4 AM.

>> Correct!
4. The police let the thief slip through their fingers at the last moment.

>> Correct!
5.Maria has never fit on with the crowd. She has always been a rebel.

>> Correct!

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