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Hi, Miss [이름]!
Some people find it hard to be content.
But I guess, you are right, it is natural for us to desire something better.
Without it, I think, we wouldn\'t improve.
They say contentment is great gain, and I agree.
But it is hard sometimes, especially because we live in a world where material things are important.
But someday, I would like to achieve the kind of peace that is gained from contentment. ^^
See you!
Teacher Anne
Right! I also use the line....I don\'t know why we are having these kind of feelings.
>> Right! I also use the line. I don\'t know why we are having these kinds of feelings.
Sometimes it makes us challenge and feel fresh
>> Sometimes it challenges us, and makes us feel refreshed.
but sometimes it also makes us to want more and when we want more...we would forget how happy we were with what we had..
>> But sometimes, it also makes us want more, and when we desire more, we forget how happy we were with what we used to have.
This is the natural feeling for the human..when we control the feeling well..we would be happier...Right?^^
>> This is a natural feeling for humans. When we control the feeling well, we would be happier, right?
1. I have a test tomorrow morning.
>> Correct!
2. Which shirt do you like? the blue one?
>> Correct! [The]
3. I have three shirts - a yellow one, an orange one, and a black one.
>> Correct!
4. You must always tell the t[이름]!
>> Correct!
5. I cannot understand how the person like him can become president.
>> I cannot understand why a person like him can become president.
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