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2016-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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In my case, I don't like to read books so reading books is not a good way to learn ssomething for me...Old generation always told me that experience is the best way to learn..I also agree with this..but the bad part is that I can't try everything. Another good way for me is watching other's experience and listening to onther's stories. It gives me lots of information about the life. 1. You should put on that red dress that I like so much. 2. You've made quite a mess. You should clean it up. 3. Could you please turn off that light? It's way too bright. 4. Come on, come on! We've been expecting you. 5. She fainted, but then she came to about 5 minutes later.

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]!

One of my teachers used to say that learning from the experience of others is a great way to learn.

She\'s right, I think.

But sometimes, when I am in a similar situation, I start to think, \"Maybe it\'s different this time.\"

Or \"Maybe my experience is different from what others went through.\"

And I end up being wrong. ^^

The important thing, though, is that we learn from them and become better for the future. ^^;

Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Miss [이름]!

See you!

Teacher Anne

 

In my case, I don\'t like to read books so reading books is not a good way to learn ssomething for me...

>> Correct! [something]

Old generation always told me that experience is the best way to learn..

>> The old generation has told me that experience is the best way to learn.

I also agree with this..but the bad part is that I can\'t try everything.

>> Correct!
Another good way for me is watching other\'s experience and listening to onther\'s stories.

>> Another good way for me is to watching others experience it themselves and listening to their stories.

It gives me lots of information about the life.

>> Correct!
1. You should put on that red dress that I like so much.

>> Correct!
2. You\'ve made quite a mess. You should clean it up.

>> Correct!
3. Could you please turn off that light? It\'s way too bright.

>> Correct!
4. Come on, come on! We\'ve been expecting you.

>> Correct!
5. She fainted, but then she came to about 5 minutes later.

>> Correct!

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