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Hi Miss [이름]!
One of my teachers used to say that learning from the experience of others is a great way to learn.
She\'s right, I think.
But sometimes, when I am in a similar situation, I start to think, \"Maybe it\'s different this time.\"
Or \"Maybe my experience is different from what others went through.\"
And I end up being wrong. ^^
The important thing, though, is that we learn from them and become better for the future. ^^;
Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Miss [이름]!
See you!
Teacher Anne
In my case, I don\'t like to read books so reading books is not a good way to learn ssomething for me...
>> Correct! [something]
Old generation always told me that experience is the best way to learn..
>> The old generation has told me that experience is the best way to learn.
I also agree with this..but the bad part is that I can\'t try everything.
>> Correct!
Another good way for me is watching other\'s experience and listening to onther\'s stories.
>> Another good way for me is to watching others experience it themselves and listening to their stories.
It gives me lots of information about the life.
>> Correct!
1. You should put on that red dress that I like so much.
>> Correct!
2. You\'ve made quite a mess. You should clean it up.
>> Correct!
3. Could you please turn off that light? It\'s way too bright.
>> Correct!
4. Come on, come on! We\'ve been expecting you.
>> Correct!
5. She fainted, but then she came to about 5 minutes later.
>> Correct!
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