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2016-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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In my opinion, that will be a great chance to learn about the life.. Studying is important in that period but also learning about life .. Some teenagers don't know how hard their parents work for them.. I guess that that will give them a good effect. 1. I always try my best. 2. Are you taliking to me? 3. I am going to the mountains this weekend. 4. What time do you normally eat lunch? 5. I have to go to bed early tonight because my train leaves at 6:00 AM tomorrow morning.

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]!

I agree with you.

I have always thought that people who experienced working hard early in life are more mature than those who didn\'t.

Back when I was in school,

I sort of envied the working students in my university, because I felt like they know more about life, compared to me.

When I started working, I learned how difficult it is to live on a budget. ^^

I might have to learn a lot in the future, but I am happy I learned to appreciate life.

See you!

Teacher Anne

 

In my opinion, that will be a great chance to learn about the life..

>> In my opinion, that will be a great chance to learn about life.
Studying is important in that period but also learning about life ..

>> Studying is important in that period, but so is learning about life.
Some teenagers don\'t know how hard their parents work for them..

>> Correct!
I guess that that will give them a good effect.
>> I guess it will have a good effect on them.
1. I always try my best.

>> Correct!
2. Are you taliking to me?

>> Correct! [talking]
3. I am going to the mountains this weekend.

>> Correct!
4. What time do you normally eat lunch?

>> Correct!
5. I have to go to bed early tonight because my train leaves at 6:00 AM
tomorrow morning
.

>> Correct!
 

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