HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
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Hi Miss [이름]!
Don\'t worry, I understand. ^^; This season is quite a busy time for you.
And I appreciate that you continue to do your best in our class. ^^
Someone once said, \"Choose a job that you love and you\'ll never have to work a day in your life.\"
Do you agree?
When I think about it, it is hard for some people,
Because others don\'t exactly have much choice. Like being a painter, for instance.
A man may love to paint but it will probably take years before his work pays off.
He will need to have a job to support himself.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts today, Miss [이름]!
Stay positive!
Teacher Anne
I think most people are working because they need money to live..
>> Correct!
Even though they love their jobs, someday they have trouble in the work and want to quit the job..
>> Even though they love their jobs, someday, they will have trouble at work and they would want to quit their jobs.
But they can\'t quit without thinking the reason why they need money..
>> But they acn\'t quit without thinking of the reason they need money.
It is toooooo sad..ㅜㅜ
>> Correct! [too]
Hi!!!Teacher Anne!
>> Correct!
I am so sorry for being lazy...ㅜㅜ
>> Correct!
I feel like my schedule is controling me nowadays..
>> Correct! [controlling]
I am always running of time..I don\'t know why..
>> I am always running out of time.
I will be better by next week...
>> Correct!
Thanks for waiting me all the time!*^^*
>> Thanks for waiting for me all the time. *^^*
Have a great great day!!
>> Correct!
[이름]ie with love*^^*
>> Correct!
OR>> From [이름]ie with love *^^*
OR>> With love,
[이름]ie
1. Sometimes telling the t[이름] can be difficult. (tell)
>> Correct!
2. I don\'t understand why you have been swearing so much. (swear)
>> Correct!
3. Don\'t forget turning the lights when you leave the room. (to turn off)
>> Don\'t forget to turn the lights off when you leave the room.
4. You need cutting your hair. It\'s getting very long. (cut)
>> You need to cut your hair. It\'s getting very long.
5. Stop interrupting him and let him finish saying what he wants to say. (interrupt)
>> Correct!
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