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Hello [이름]!
Thank you for expressing your opinion about our topic. I guess being famous entails bigger responsibility as well.
I know that you have the determination to achieve your goals in life.
Just put your best foot forward in order for you to be successful.
Have a great day!!!
T.Jeny
Sometimes I like to be famous.
>>correct
When I feel that life is boring, I want to make something funny affair.
>>When I feel that life is boring, I want to make something funny.
I imagine that If I were a famous person to be.
>>I am imagining what if I am a famous person.
The things that someone admired me is to make me nervous and tension but It is help me to live righteously a little bit.
>>It will make me nervous if someone will admire me but I could also help me live a righteous life.
Because everyone always look at me.
>>Because I know that everybody is looking at me.
I might be fun a little bit thought inconveniently.
>>It might be fun but it could inconvenient as well.
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