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Hi Miss [이름]!
It also makes me happy when I find a friend who shares the same interests with me. ^^
When I was still a student, I had a friend who was very smart.
She found it easy to understand complicated books.
Because of the time we spent together, I think I became a little bit smarter than I used to. ^^
Sometimes people can really influence us in many ways.
When I found the line (Choose a job...) I also thought it was awesome. ^^;
See you later!
Teacher Anne
I reall appreciate you give me good ideas and energy.
>> I really appreciate that you give me good ideas and energy.
I like this line..\"Choose a job that you love and you\'ll never have to work a day in your life\" I will write in my diary to remember..
>> I like this line,\"Choose a job that you love and you\'ll never have to work a day in your life.\" I will write it in my diary for me to remember.
Your question really makes me think because it is always happening in work.
>> Your question really makes me think because it is always happening at work.
It is hard to make friends in the work place..but happily, I have a best co-teacher..
>> It is hard to make friends in the work place, but happily, I have the best co-teacher.
Our personailties are similar so when I hang out with her, I am happy..
>> Correct! [personalities]
I like to be with good people who are neat and clam..and also good at something..
>> I like to be with good people who are neat and calm, and are also good at something.
My co-teacher is smart and good at teaching..I learn many things from her..^^
>> My co-teacher is smart and is good in teaching. I keep on learning many things from her. ^^
1. How do you account to the rise in crime this year?
>> How do you account for the rise in crime this year?
2. Do you feel like playing soccer? = Are you up to some soccer?
>> Correct!
3. My girlfriend and I broke up last month.
>> Correct!
4. If you\'re telling someone to calm down, you\'re telling them to relax.
>> Correct!
5. This is the time of year when stores mark down their prices, so you can get good deals.
>> Correct!
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