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2016-02-02 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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I reall appreciate you give me good ideas and energy. I like this line.."Choose a job that you love and you'll never have to work a day in your life" I will write in my diary to remember.. Your question really makes me think because it is always happening in work. It is hard to make friends in the work place..but happily, I have a best co-teacher.. Our personailties are similar so when I hang out with her, I am happy.. I like to be with good people who are neat and clam..and also good at something.. My co-teacher is smart and good at teaching..I learn many things from her..^^ 1. How do you account to the rise in crime this year? 2. Do you feel like playing soccer? = Are you up to some soccer? 3. My girlfriend and I broke up last month. 4. If you're telling someone to calm down, you're telling them to relax. 5. This is the time of year when stores mark down their prices, so you can get good deals.

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]!

It also makes me happy when I find a friend who shares the same interests with me. ^^

When I was still a student, I had a friend who was very smart.

She found it easy to understand complicated books.

Because of the time we spent together, I think I became a little bit smarter than I used to. ^^

Sometimes people can really influence us in many ways.

When I found the line (Choose a job...) I also thought it was awesome. ^^;

See you later!

Teacher Anne

 

I reall appreciate you give me good ideas and energy.

>> I really appreciate that you give me good ideas and energy.
I like this line..\"Choose a job that you love and you\'ll never have to work a day in your life\" I will write in my diary to remember..
>> I like this line,\"Choose a job that you love and you\'ll never have to work a day in your life.\" I will write it  in my diary for me to remember.

Your question really makes me think because it is always happening in work.

>> Your question really makes me think because it is always happening at work.
It is hard to make friends in the work place..but happily, I have a best co-teacher..

>> It is hard to make friends in the work place, but happily, I have the best co-teacher.
Our personailties are similar so when I hang out with her, I am happy..

>> Correct! [personalities]
I like to be with good people who are neat and clam..and also good at something..

>> I like to be with good people who are neat and calm, and are also good at something.
My co-teacher is smart and good at teaching..I learn many things from her..^^
>> My co-teacher is smart and is good in teaching. I keep on learning many things from her. ^^
1. How do you account to the rise in crime this year?

>> How do you account for the rise in crime this year?
2. Do you feel like playing soccer? = Are you up to some soccer?

>> Correct!
3. My girlfriend and I broke up last month.

>> Correct!

4. If you\'re telling someone to calm down, you\'re telling them to relax.

>> Correct!
5. This is the time of year when stores mark down their prices, so you can get good deals.

>> Correct!

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