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I my opnion, education is very important more than industrial skills.
Improving industrial skills need a lot of information.
I think after developing countries promte education, they have to promote education.
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I my opnion, education is very important more than industrial skills.
>> In my opinion, education is very important more than industrial skills.
Improving industrial skills need a lot of information.
>> correct!
I think after developing countries promte education, they have to promote education.
>> I think that after developing countries have promoted education, they can also promote the development of industrial skills.
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