homework

Hi there, [이름]!

Thank you so much for doing your homework. I can feel your eagerness to learn. I hope that I can help you improve your skills in English. Anyway, have a good day and see you in class~

~Kelly^^

The reason why I want to study English is difficulty in having a conversation with my friends who use English.

>> The reason why I want to study English is because of my difficulty in having a conversation with my friends who speak in English.
First, Two month ago, I had been in singapore for my winter vacation. and I met a lots of people in there.

>> Firstly, two months ago, I went to singapore for my winter vacation and I met lots of people there.

>> I had been in singapore for my winter vacation and I met a lot of people in there.

And, I made some singaporian friends.

>> Correct.

When I was in singapore, I can share many good feelings and experinece with them in English.

>> When I was in Singapore, I shared many good feelings and experiences with them in English.

But, that was not enough to have a deep conversation.

>> But, it was not enough to have a deep conversation.

So, I decieded to study English especially speaking. 

>> Correct.
Second, I like learning foreign language.

>> Secondly, I like learning a foreign language.

When I was thirteen, I studied Japanese.

>> Correct.

When I was seventeen, I studied Spanish.

>> Correct.

And, I\'m still learning Sapanish. 

>> Correct.
If I can speaking in English and Spanish well, I will quit my job and have another job.
>> If I can speak in English and Spanish well, I will quit my job and have another job.
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It is really nice to meet you, Kelly. Thank you for teaching me.

>> Correct.
feel that class time is a little early for me.

>> I feel that my class time is a little early for me.

But, I will try to do my best.

>> Correct.
 Bye, Have a good evening.

>> Correct.