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2016-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Thanks so much!*^^* "Confidence is the key to everything" I will keep this in my mind. Nowadays..especially in English, you are the most important influence on me. You encourage me and lead me to be a better speaker. Like I said, the friends are the most important influence on young adults. People who are together and share the things they had can make people close. So, naturally they trust each other. I am also influenced by friends more...That is why, old people alwys tell us "be with good friends.."*^^* 1. I know someone who has been there. 2. What fault is it? 3. Q: which dress did you choose? A: I chose the red one. 4. I don't know anyone who likes this kind of music. 5. Which Beatles album is your favorite?

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]!

Thank you! I am happy that you consider me an important influence in studying English. ^^;

I remember a friend of mine who influenced me in philosophy.

I think it was because of her that I took the subject a little too seriously. ^^

How about you? Who influenced into becoming a teacher?

Now that I think about it, teaching seems like a dangerous job.

Because we tend to influence many people, ^^;

See you later, Miss [이름]!

Teacher Anne

 

Thanks so much!*^^* \"Confidence is the key to everything\"

>> Correct!
I will keep this in my mind.

>> Correct!
Nowadays..especially in English, you are the most important influence on me.

>> Nowadays, especially in English, you are the most important influence on me.
You encourage me and lead me to be a better speaker.

>> Correct!
Like I said, the friends are the most important influence on young adults.

>> Correct!
People who are together and share the things they had can make people close

>> Correct!
So, naturally they trust each other.

>> Correct!
I am also influenced by friends more...

>> I am also influenced by my friends more.

That is why, old people alwys tell us \"be with good friends..\"*^^*
>> That is why, old people always tell us, \"Be with good friends.\" *^^*
1. I know someone who has been there.
>> Correct!
2. What fault is it?
>> Whose
3. Q: which dress did you choose?
A: I chose the red one.

>> Correct! [Which]
4. I don\'t know anyone who likes this kind of music.
>> Correct!
5. Which Beatles album is your favorite?

>> Correct!

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