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2016-02-04 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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There are many diffrent reasons to listen to music.. People dont want to make themselves bored so they try to listen to music and they can remember good memories while listening to music. And also they use the music as the tool of learning..In addition, music has magical power..it makes us feel calm and emotional.. 1. How long have you been single? 2. How often does she go out? 3. How much money does Tim make? 4. How well do you speak Arabic? 5. Q:How much does your father smoke? A: About two cigarettes a day.

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]!

Music is really a mysterious thing.

It can touch the deepest part of our souls. ^^

One song can make us feel relieved or strong.

Others can also bring tears in our eyes.

When this happens, I really have no explanation for it.

What song makes you remember some memories?

Thank you for expressing your thoughts today.

Remember to always believe in yourself. ^^;

Have a lovely day!

Teacher Anne

 

There are many diffrent reasons to listen to music..

>> Correct! [different]
People dont want to make themselves bored so they try to listen to music

>> Correct! [don\'t]

OR>> People don\'t want to feel bored so they try to listen to music.

and they can remember good memories while listening to music.

>> Correct!

OR>> they can also remember good memories while listening to music.

And also they use the music as the tool of learning..

>> And they also use music as a tool for learning.

In addition, music has magical power..it makes us feel calm and emotional..
>> In addition, music has magical powers. It makes us feel calm and emotional.
1. How long have you been single?

>> Correct!
2. How often does she go out?

>> Correct!
3. How much money does Tim make?

>> Correct!
4. How well do you speak Arabic?

>> Correct!
5. Q:How much does your father smoke?
A: About two cigarettes a day.

>> Correct!

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